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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Colors

    Hello for the third time! xD Right off the bat, I can tell you that I honestly enjoyed this piece. The rhyme scheme didn't seem absolutely ridiculous to me (actually, ...

    Feb 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Boy and His Violin

    Hello again! Once again, there are quite a few reviews, so I'll quickly apologize for the same things I had apologized for before. xD Now, to get started, I'll have ...

    Feb 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Engulfed By My Flames

    Hey Life, here as requested. ^^ This all ready seems to have quite a few reviews, so this one may be short and somewhat useless. I apologize in advance for ...

    Feb 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: What have you done to me?!

    Hi Charli, Isha here and I'll be your reviewer today. ^^ When I first started reading this, I wasn't quite sure what to think about it. It seemed decent enough, ...

    Feb 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Intentions

    Hi Coral! Sorry this took so long. xD I've been a bit preoccupied for the past two days or so. The first comment I want to make is about your ...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Strangest Strange Stranger - by JASH

    Hai Jash-ie! Okay, so, I managed to finish reading this a couple hours ago, but I was ever so rudely kicked off of the computer before I could actually get ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Did I Drown

    Ligreots! Okay, here as requested. The first thing I'd like to say is that this very much amused me. xD I get the Gilligan's Island theme stuck in my head ...

    Feb 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Old

    Rhino. *tips hat* So, I was going to review every single part for you, because you're special, but then I decided to be lame and only review this one instead. ...

    Feb 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: W.R.I.T.E.R.S Ch. 1

    Dude. I am here, and a little late by the looks of it. One of the first things I noticed upon reading this was the large amount of grammar mistakes. ...

    Feb 2, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: W.R.I.T.E.R.S (Prologue)

    Um. Wow, you have quite a few reviews here. xD Since I was requested, I'll review this anyways. Please, forgive me if I'm repeating everything everybody else says. (Those are ...

    Feb 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Chamomile

    It's me for the third time! (I did these reviews in the wrong order. xD) This might be another some-what useless review. So, my apologies for that. Normally, I'm a ...

    Feb 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Idolatry II

    Coral! It's me, again! The first thing I thought upon starting to read this was, Wow. Nice vocabulary. And then I had to open up an online dictionary. (No I'm ...

    Feb 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: perfect

    Hi Coral! Here as requested, though there seem to be quite a few reviews before mine. I apologize in advance for any repetition. Right off the bat, I want to ...

    Feb 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Tale From Someone With a Tail.

    Matthews! You, yeah you! The first thing I wanted to tell you was that this is definitely a poem. It would probably be considered 'narrative' poetry, but you might want ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Iced Petals

    Hunaz. (I will forever call you that-- on occasion.) You wanted me to tell you something bad about this, so I'm going to try sound as mean as possible. xD ...

    Jan 30, 2011


Everything in the universe has a rhythm, everything dances.
— Maya Angelou