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FQ, hi! I'm going to review this for you. xD First of all, I will just say that I loved this, loved the message, etc, etc. I don't have much ...

Yo Rebimoso, here as you requested me to be. ;D First off, I will say that I like this quite a lot. The emotion is obvious, and it didn't seem ...

Scarli, hi! So, um, I think that this is the first time I've ever reviewed anything by you in my entire life, so let's see here. xD First of all, ...

'Ello Snicker. First thing's first. I'll start by saying that I disagree with Canbe about the length thing -- I often find that long poems are better. But anyways, I ...

Pengette, I am here. *reviews* So, this was definitely an interesting poem. I'm not quite sure how to review it properly, but I'll give it my best shot. xD It ...

Passport... Hai! *reviews* First off, I would really like to say that I like the idea of this poem. Like Flem, I was seeing it as a bit of a ...

H'okay! So, I liked this chapter a lot more. It explained things better, and though I would still have liked a bit more clarification in the last chapter, I have ...

Amie, I'm here yet again! First off, you had pretty much completely lost me with this chapter. The voice changed, the writing style changed, and the jump from the last ...

Cafe. Hi. Stella's pointed out most of the nit-picks, so I'll move on. (Yay, my favorite part of the review!) First off, I'd like to say that this was quite ...

Canis. I am here as requested. And, I just wanted to say that I'm not quite sure how to review this piece. The imagery, the description and the word choices ...

Amie. I am here again. This review might be shorter than my other one, since most of everything has been taken care of and pointed out already. So, I liked ...

Hi amie, here as requested. People have already pointed out most of the grammar and such, so I don't have to worry about that. So, let's get started here. First ...

Luma, I am going to review this because you asked so nicely - but, be warned that this is going to be one of my most pointless reviews yet. xD ...

So, I've finally come to review this! I've read all three chapters, but I only have time to review one. (I hope that this is okay. My apologies in advance) ...

Chaaang. Here as you so requested. :3 Now... the first thing I'll say is that I really, really liked the character here. Her voice was awesome, and I loved the ...