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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Myschae - Prologue/Chapter 1

    Hi Matthews! Here as requested! First of all, I want to say a few things about your writing style. There's nothing really wrong with it, other than that I found ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Once my only love but now, my passionate hate.

    Kaaagiiii. I am here as requested. Unfortunately, you seem to have an awful lot of really in-depth reviews already, so now I'm all intimidated-like. oo" So, I don't know how ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Quit Trying Now

    Tammypoo! Here as requested (finally)! As I told you earlier, lyrics aren't really my strong suite, so this might be a bit short and pointless. xD First off, the song ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Nostalgia

    'Ello Larva! Here as requested. :3 I don't have a whole lot to add to the rest of the reviews, but I'll try my best. xD Also, I'm warning you ...

    Apr 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: --------

    Hello, here to review as requested! ^.^ Right away, I'll say that this story has plenty of potential - but it is very, very lacking in some aspects. For example; ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Murderous Love [Alternative]

    Hey Jes, here again as requested. I didn't see much difference between these two pieces, to be honest. The only thing that really stood out to me was that the ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Murderous Love

    Here as you requested! Unfortunately, Octave sort of covered pretty much everything I was thinking about. xD I agree with her in pretty close to every aspect, and I found ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: One by One (chapter 1)

    Flowa! I am here. I suppose, since you haven't gotten any yet, I'll go on and point out a few nit-picks. Sliding up silently , I feel the dull pressure ...

    Apr 9, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Boy and His Moon

    Hello again Fearless! Once again, I apologize for how long it's taken me to get to your review. >.< The last review I wrote for you, I gave you nitpicks, ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Three of Clubs

    Hello! Isha here to review as requested! ^.^ (Sorry it's taken so long!) I suppose that since you don't have any, I'll start off with something I don't usually do ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Time of Our Lies (Chapter One)

    Hey Lala, here to review as requested! The first thing I want to say here is that this sort of things isn't really my style or genre, so take everything ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Grandpa

    Hello Sare! I'm here to review this as requested. I'm not sure how one offers condolences through a review, but I do nonetheless.

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Frame My Future

    Hello, Noelle! I'm here to review this for you. ^^ First off, I want to say that this had its ups and its downs. As a whole, I found it ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Nothing's gonna be okay

    Hi Demoness, I'm here to review this for you. ^^ First of all, this poem was definitely an interesting piece. I say the title, and at first I was expecting ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Ghost and I

    Hello Smile, I'm here to review this. ^^ First of all, I would just like to tell you that you have succeeded in creating a piece that I absolutely loved, ...

    Feb 27, 2011


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