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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Myschae - Prologue/Chapter 1

    Hi Matthews! Here as requested! First of all, I want to say a few things about your writing style. There's nothing really wrong with it, other than that I found ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Once my only love but now, my passionate hate.

    Kaaagiiii. I am here as requested. Unfortunately, you seem to have an awful lot of really in-depth reviews already, so now I'm all intimidated-like. oo" So, I don't know how ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Quit Trying Now

    Tammypoo! Here as requested (finally)! As I told you earlier, lyrics aren't really my strong suite, so this might be a bit short and pointless. xD First off, the song ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Nostalgia

    'Ello Larva! Here as requested. :3 I don't have a whole lot to add to the rest of the reviews, but I'll try my best. xD Also, I'm warning you ...

    Apr 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: --------

    Hello, here to review as requested! ^.^ Right away, I'll say that this story has plenty of potential - but it is very, very lacking in some aspects. For example; ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Murderous Love [Alternative]

    Hey Jes, here again as requested. I didn't see much difference between these two pieces, to be honest. The only thing that really stood out to me was that the ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Murderous Love

    Here as you requested! Unfortunately, Octave sort of covered pretty much everything I was thinking about. xD I agree with her in pretty close to every aspect, and I found ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: One by One (chapter 1)

    Flowa! I am here. I suppose, since you haven't gotten any yet, I'll go on and point out a few nit-picks. Sliding up silently , I feel the dull pressure ...

    Apr 9, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Boy and His Moon

    Hello again Fearless! Once again, I apologize for how long it's taken me to get to your review. >.< The last review I wrote for you, I gave you nitpicks, ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Three of Clubs

    Hello! Isha here to review as requested! ^.^ (Sorry it's taken so long!) I suppose that since you don't have any, I'll start off with something I don't usually do ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Time of Our Lies (Chapter One)

    Hey Lala, here to review as requested! The first thing I want to say here is that this sort of things isn't really my style or genre, so take everything ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Grandpa

    Hello Sare! I'm here to review this as requested. I'm not sure how one offers condolences through a review, but I do nonetheless.

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Frame My Future

    Hello, Noelle! I'm here to review this for you. ^^ First off, I want to say that this had its ups and its downs. As a whole, I found it ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Nothing's gonna be okay

    Hi Demoness, I'm here to review this for you. ^^ First of all, this poem was definitely an interesting piece. I say the title, and at first I was expecting ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Ghost and I

    Hello Smile, I'm here to review this. ^^ First of all, I would just like to tell you that you have succeeded in creating a piece that I absolutely loved, ...

    Feb 27, 2011


“Rise like Lions after slumber In unvanquishable number. Shake your chains to earth like dew Which in sleep had fallen on you— Ye are many—they are few.”
— Mary Shelly