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Hey there! Shane here to review. Alright, so I've been to a number of youth retreats. And I'm going to have to say that I've always felt more connected to ...

Hey there! Shane here for an (attempt of) a review! So, I basically suck at reviewing shorter pieces, but this one intrigued me, so I'm going to give it a ...

Hey there! Shane here to review. I'm going to say that I'm really, really impressed with the way you presented the idea in your poem. It's something that a lot ...

Hey there! Isha here for a review. Okay, so the message you're trying to portray here is one that, technically speaking, needs to be heard. Women need to know what ...

Hey there! Isha here to review. Okay so, I read .1, and I have to say that the plot has the potential to be... interesting, I suppose? I'm kind of ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS, and Shane here to review :) Alrighty, so you've got yourself an amazing idea for a story. Like, honestly, this has the potential to rip ...

Hey there! Isha here for a review :) B'awe, this is a sweet little story. I know a lot of people who've had some pretty bizarre baby deliveries, and this ...

And here for a review as requested. Alrighty, so we're going to cut straight to the chase here. From what I can tell, it's a lot less boring to read, ...

It would be a lot easier to spontaneously review your work if there was anything to criticize, darn it. I'm going to try anyway, but chances are that most of ...

Hey there! Isha here for a review. So, I can't really say much about what I liked about this piece. The writing quality is technically not too shabby, and... I ...

Hey there! Isha here to review :) So first off, I just wanted to say that I've always been fairly interested in stories that have to do with future wars. ...

Hey there! Isha here for a review :) Okie dokie, so the fact that you used a poem to express your hatred of poetry sort of flabbergasts me, but my ...

Hey there! Isha here for a review. Okay, so I really liked the ending to this story. You closed it really well, and in a way that provoked emotion without ...

Hey there! Isha here to review. This poem is, in a word, personal. The emotion conveyed is honest and quite raw (which is good!), and I think that a lot ...

Man, Joshuapaul stole everything I wanted to say :( What he said about using the title as a bit of a cheat is completely true, and I'd utilize that in ...