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Hi Hermes92! Isha here to review! The first thing I'll tell you is that this story does have a little bit of potential. Granted, it's potential to become yet another ...

Hi, tyengle! Isha here to review! First of all, this review is going to be a biiit on the harsh side. I really liked your concept and the story-line, but ...

Hey Forgotenlover! Isha here to review. First of all, you do have conflict, which is good. However, conflict seems to be the only thing you have going for you here. ...

Good day, my lovely Kagi! I shall review this for you, because you requested it and what-not. So, to start things off, I'm going to sniff around your concept a ...

Hey, Gracie, Isha here to review. ^.^ First of all, I'm going to say something quick about the idea you have going here: I like it. Mostly. The fact that ...

Hi, Passion! Isha here to review. ^.^ First of all, this poem has a good idea, and potential to become something very much worth reading. Unfortunately, what it did lack ...

Hi, Basham! Isha here to review! First of all, I'm going to say that although this layout has been used in poetry before, you have to be extremely careful when ...

Hi, Doxie! Isha here to review! ^.^ To tell you te truth, this poem wasn't all that enjoyable for me. It's a good idea to set as the foundation of ...

Hi, snoopysoap! Isha here to review! ^.^ First of all, I'm going to have to say that the twist at the end of this poem was surprising and for the ...

Hey, Mikko! Isha here to review! ^.^ Now, the first thing I'm going to say is that, yes, this is a little bit confusing. Not really because I didn't know ...

Scarli! ^.^ Here to attempt to review. (Note that I'm still just getting back into practice here. x.x) First of all, this is definitely a major improvement over the first ...

Hi, Arwen! Isha here to sort-of-review! ^.^ And I say sort of, because this review will fail as far as critiquing goes. There isn't a lot that I can say ...

Hi, Shinrai! ^.^ Isha here to review. First of all, I'm going to say that although this was somewhat cliche in areas, and the bright colors (it was more the ...

Hi, iheatbooks, Isha here to review. ^.^ And you know, right off the bat I'm going to say that I know what Writer's Block is like. It does eventually go ...

Hey Justtrying, here to review! ^^ Note that this review will probably be more harsh than the ones you've already received. I'm going to be entirely honest in it, but ...