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  • Other » General, General Re: A Diary Entry

    Hey there! eldEr here for a review! I'm going to start off by saying that this idea is kind of fascinating. Personifying inanimate objects has always intrigued me, and in ...

    Apr 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1)-Chapter 2

    Hey there! Sorry it took a bit, but I'm here to review like I said I would :) First of all- wow. A lot happens in this chapter. The big ...

    Mar 23, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1)-Chapter 1

    Hey there! Popping in for a review! So, you've got an interesting premise going here. Werewolf vs mortal is a classic, and as long as you play your cards right, ...

    Feb 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: -deleted-

    Okay! Here again! I'm not as sure about how I feel about this chapter as the last ones. The shift in point of view threw me off a little bit, ...

    Feb 12, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: -deleted-

    And here for another review! I liked this chapter as much as the previous ones. The opening was a bit messier as far as the quality of the writing itself ...

    Feb 12, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: -deleted-

    Hello there! Stopping in for a review! I've caught up on reading from the prologue- I've actually found myself pretty captivated by the work itself-, so I'm going to leave ...

    Feb 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: To The Guy I Used To Hide Myself

    Hello! Dropping in for a review. First and foremost, I wanted to say that this is a piece I could personally relate to. My assumption is that it's about growing ...

    Feb 12, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Teasing Horizon Chapter 1: Holding a Secret Breath

    Hey there! Isha here to review! Okay so, this story is pretty awesome so far. Your writing quality keeps up well for most of the piece (there are a couple ...

    Nov 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Intro & Chapt. 1 (in part)

    Hey there! Isha here to review :) Wow. I read the synopsis of the story, and honestly didn't anticipate being as interested as I am. Your characters, so far, seem ...

    Nov 5, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Science Fiction Re: The Last Sun

    Hey there! Isha here to shoot you a quick review :) The part of this story that stood out to me was your main character. She seemed to have a ...

    Nov 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: I Want To Be Enough

    Hey there; Isha here to review. Alright, so I've got a few things I wanted to say about this. The title suggests a theme that could be touching, and extremely ...

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: the memoir of contemplative bedsheets

    I'm going to review this for you because my friend fell asleep three like five hours ago and YOU DESERVE A REVIEW. *cracks knuckles* Okay, so your prose/poetry abilities are ...

    Aug 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Unwanted Plotline

    Hey there! Isha here for a review :) First of all, you have some pretty stunning imagery in this piece. You paint us a picture of what this girl is; ...

    Jul 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Slavery

    Hey there! Isha here for a review. Alright, so you've got yourself a poem with a super interesting concept, and one that has the potential to be very provoking emotionally ...

    Jul 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: I Remember What You Said

    Hey there! Shane here to review :) Okay, so this topic is definitely an interesting one, and obviously one with an underlying passion to it. The poem tells us a ...

    Jun 5, 2014


When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind