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Re: Change
thanks loadds
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Re: Change
thanks for the likes lydvarn and justlittleoleme
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Re: in church, in us
shes not preaching
Oct 18, 2012 -
Re: in church, in us
i think unsocial butterfly is completley right
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Re: The sun sets, but it's a new day
good job this is a very strong moving poem you should be proud of your great gift when it comes to writing i really enjoyed your style p.s please read ...
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Re: I walk down a street
good job i really love this you did a great job and the wording is very strong you should be really proud of this great piece! P.S please read 'change' ...
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Re: A Tiny Little White Lie
THAT WAS SHOCKING.YOU HAVE WROTE SUCH A POWERFULL STORY AND THE LAST 9 WORDS ENDED THE STORY GREAT YOU HAVE A REAL TALENT .!!
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Re: Damned Soliloquy
this is a very good piece you should be proud of your gift when it comes to writing keep up the good work:) P.S read my poem on change and ...
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Re: in church, in us
This is a very powerful great piece of poetry i enjoyed your great few of perspective. Astonishingly good you should be proud of your talent. P.S please read and comment ...
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Re: Change
Please comment on anything you like or find a problem thanks!!
Oct 17, 2012