dystopianmonkey01

Thank you for your review. I'll definitely take the the idea of stanzas into account.

Thank youuu :)

Thanks! :)

To be honest though Memo you shouldn't have put this down as a review, it didn't give me any criticism to be honest, but anything for the points, am I ...

Thanks Memo, I'll read them both

Hey memo, thank you for your review. I know that the key to a good poem is explanation, through imagery, emotive language, extended vocabulary etc. I usually, actually almost always ...

Thanks Kaos!!

Thanks heaps!

You too!

Thank you for this, it helps heaps! I'll definitely edit this and improve upon your suggestions. Although you suggested to alter the last line to fit in with the first ...

Oh wow, thanks so much! Have a lovely Christmas :)

That's good :)) glad I could clear the air

Thanks! I'll fix these things.

Thank you. This was an attempt at prose but yeah looking back I can understand how you would get lost in the paragraph :)

Thank you!! The "Oh, I'm fine." was the response to the question at the top "how are you?", so naturally the same person who the 'story' was aimed from, would ...