dregymayfield

This was okay, it could have been better and I really doubt you wrote this for your school. Ever since the school shooting incidences many schools will not allow their ...

I liked this poem although some parts seemed a little forced. However, I'm sure that many of us have forced rhymed before. I noticed the mispelling of "held" as well. ...

I guess the other 21 people before me are lamewads who can't leave a post. God, that pisses me off when we submit our work and all these people read ...

I actually liked this a lot and can relate to it sometimes. Which I'm sure just about everyone can relate to being lazy now and then. Although I never see ...

Verse one: What I've been meaning to say; For so long And yes; It matters What I've been putting off each day; Cos I'm less strong Than the all the ...

I have no idea who David Archuleta is, but from what I have read from your song he sounds like one of those singers who sing about sissy things. You ...

hmm...sorry, but this really is quite bland (not that my stuff is any better), it\'s just too cliche and not original. Also you didn\'t need commas in the chorus when ...

I liked this a lot...I only saw two things that were a bit off. The first was when you said \"And maybe it’s these grey skies Or maybe it’s town ...

Is this about Jesus Christ or some Mexican guy named Jesus \"hey zues\" . If it\'s about Jesus Christ I find it hard to believe that you \"knew\" him since ...

At first I was not sure if this was about a father/daughter domestic situation or about abusing love situation...although the later seems to fit when reading further through the lyric. ...

I\'m a bit more cynical with this piece. Razcoon pointed out all of the flaws that were scattered within this piece. This just came off being too cliche\' and some ...

This pretty much explains how I feel...I just copied it from someone else...feel free to point your gun at me: You\'ve created a really nice landscape for emotion-- the repetition ...

Okay, I\'m not sure if you posted Lady Gaga\'s song here or not. Also, are you telling us that you\'re gay? Because what\'s the whole deal with the gay\'s shouldn\'t ...

It seems no one picked up on you saying \"Love is looking if your eyes. \" rather than saying \"Love is looking in your eyes\". You made this mistake twice. ...

I agree with Aquamarine when he/she said this: \"The first thing I noticed here were the ellipses. I\'m assuming (apologies if the assumption is incorrect) that you\'re using them to ...