dreamintechnicolour

I really liked this, nothing to critique really. I loved the Styrofoam line (just like everyone else, I know...). Only problem is, that Starbucks don't use Styrofoam cups and they ...

This was great! I laughed constantly in that kind of laughter where you know there'll be something funny coming up so you may as well not stop. Epic craftsmanship my ...

I liked what I read of this. But it really was too long for the Internet. I think if you broke it up into parts just for the critiques then ...

Wow, i really liked this. It was entertaining and amusing and didn't lose my attention. The dialogue and action was great. I loved that Tom and death seemed like just ...

Ok, at the risk of being shot by all the people who think it is the greatest literary work since sliced bread... To Kill A Mockingbird is the absolute worst ...

Welcome to YWS! Right-o, I know that this little piece has already gotten quite in-depth reviews but I shall add my two-cents worth as well... Here's a little known fact ...

I love it! It really does make me want to read more. Mona caught my eye the minute I saw her, dancing into the cafeteria, very climatically (I don't think ...

Wow, this is sheer brilliance. Your writing makes my day. I can't fault it, although I much prefer the revised version of this piece; I like that it's slight;y longer ...

I quite like this. Very nice. However; the lack of punctuation and excessive spacing, in my opinion, made it quite hard to read. I tried to put the correct punctuation ...

I really like this. Very thought provoking. Only things I would change: these lines Would you tell me that you love me? Would you pretend to be above me? I ...

I like it so far, your MC seems real already. The faint sound of rain tapping against the window hadn’t lulled Rose to sleep. For some reason I just love ...

I really liked this. It was powerfully written and you have an amazing way with the second person (which most people can't do). Just a few little things which I ...

Gah! All my extremely intelligent points that I'd jotted down have already been taken!! Uhhhhh... Just in this sentence: so tight it felt like he would never let go. And ...

I love this so much!!! I actually read All Babies Are Blessings first, which kinda ruined the element of mystery for me...But I would have read through this even so... ...

awww, I like it... I think it's sweet. The lines would benefit from being like this, however,: Friend: let me say first that I am sorry. I am sorry, because ...