dragonlover92

WOW! Best word for it, it has amazing feeling and depth to it. I can really feel the pain the person is going through. I really enjoyed that I got ...

This was amazing! It had so much feeling and I loved the vocabulary you used! I really liked the part "the sky flutters gray to the ground, and drags down ...

Wow, this is really good and made me feel a lot. You gave very good images and it had a lot of good words to elaborate how you were feeling. ...

I really like this! Made me laugh and smile a lot, but you lost me a little bit at "Till one day, away she ran, into trees’ care But she ...

So much going through my head. This was really good and it had sooo much feeling put into it. Made me feel angry in a way of how no one ...

This was really great! Made me think about this world we live in and what we do on a dayly basis. Made me think about all the judgement we do ...

This had alot of meaning in it, and it made me feel a rush from my past. It made me feel the longing that I think is what you were ...

I really like this, but i'm kind of confused by the beginning. Were they things that she couldn't hear? Or stuff that was being said at the time? Maybe be ...

Wow, this was Amazing haha. But really this was very good at first i thought you were talking about a magician and her show, and then when you keep reading ...

This has a lot of feeling in it and a lot of it explained how someone feels when a loved one leave, which was very good. But i think you ...

I like this. Very well written and very good at the description, but one line i did get held up on when I was reading was, "it remembered a moment ...

This is really good. It has a lot of feelings to it, and it gives you a thought of how much these two people love and care for each other. ...

This was great! It reminds me of a writer one of my friends likes, she writes like this and its always amazing. Just like that writer this was amazing, you ...

That was awesome! I was smiling and laughing through it all. I love how u give it from the dog's view and how u mintion the owner. Also I really ...

Good. Has a lot of feeling in it, makes me think about my relationship and what i'm blinded by. I like that in this you made me think, I like ...