Wow, this was Amazing haha. But really this was very good at first i thought you were talking about a magician and her show, and then when you keep reading you learn that its about a girl who to me seems like just a happy little girl who love to live life to the fullest. She reminded me of Pippi Longstocking in a way. This story made me smile and I liked it very much! Excellent job!

You should break the lines up into smaller lines so it'll flow better. I liked it, though, in my opinion, it may have been a little repetitive. You should do a series of poems, like do other emotions. I'd love to read those too. Good job on grammer