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Thanks for the advise. I do try to proofread but since I know the story intended it can be a bit hard to see where the phrasing is off. That's ...

thanks for the review! I am glad you enjoyed. This chapter is one I hope to improve a lot since the dialogue is a bit long. Your reviewing format is ...

Thanks for the review, your advice was very helpful :)

Thanks for tagging me, I actually really enjoyed reading this.

Thanks. This was my most difficult chapter to write for the same reason you mentioned about long dialogue sections. I ended up shortening Shadow's part of the prophecy to cut ...

I thought of adding a reason Shear couldn't come but ended up kind of ignoring it. Thanks for pointing it out. If readers are noticing something off it really motivates ...

Wow! This is very helpful, thank you. I realised it was repetitive but didn't know how to change it up so thanks for that. Having a vocal style for each ...

Thanks for your reviews! I am heavily inspired by Wings of Fire and How to Train Your Dragon. But this is probably the most closely related part of my book ...

Thanks for the review! I love dragons and Wings of Fire too! I used WoF as heavy inspiration for this book and the dragon names are based off the element ...

Thanks for the review! I was able to fix most of the errors and I'm glad you enjoyed. :)

Thanks for the review, it looks very professional. I might do subtitles so that those who read this without reading the prior stories will understand it. Also, I like that ...

Thanks for the review! %uD83D%uDE04 I was also worried about showing instead of telling so thanks for the reminder. As for the description of the world I am editing that ...

Thanks, I actually copied this over from Word and I used a special font to separate memories/visions from normal dialogue. Unfortunately this font has everything in caps so I couldn't ...

Thanks for the review. I didn't realise Shadow's grin could be interpreted that way. I just wanted to show that he was happy and excited that his plan to communicate ...

Thanks for the review, I do actually describe Umbra and how/why Shadow grew up alone in the prologue of this story if you want more details. Though it is probably ...