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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 11
Thanks!
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 11
Thanks for your corrections. I actually did put an extra space between the days but I guess it was lost when I copied it over from Word. Your theories and ...
Mar 25, 2024 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 11
Thanks so much for the stellar review! I didn't even realise I was spelling his name as Ethen. It was meant to be Ethan Ezrahite (referring to the a man ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 19
Seems I've got more testing to do. Dragon Dragon
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 7
I have watched Harry Potter and read Eragon. I'm not going for something quite so complex but I'm glad my story reminded you of such great works. Also, the academy ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1) Chapter 10 (part 2)
Thanks so much! You always seem to understand what I was trying to get across right way. I'm so glad my descriptions of Steven and Felicia have caused you intrigue. ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising: Prologue
Thanks for your thoughts on this. So glad you read it.
Mar 22, 2024 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1) Chapter 10 (part 2)
Thanks for your comments and your advice. As always, they were very helpful.
Mar 21, 2024 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 6
Thanks for the advice. I might add a short moment of silence near the end of the flight as the reality sinks in. Give it some extra time there and ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 5
Wow! You are flying through! I better get my last few chapters poste quick ha ha. Love the way you mix up your sign off by the way. Very cool.
Mar 20, 2024 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 4
So glad you enjoyed. It was so much fun writing the action scene and you might be surprised how quick fights between non-pro fighters can be. (I based this off ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 2
Thanks so much for your comments. I may not reply to every review right away but I'm so grateful to see your thoughts on each chapter.
Mar 20, 2024 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 10 (part 1)
Thank you so much for the critique about quotation marks. I wanted to break up the longer speeches but wasn't sure how. Now I do! ;)
Mar 20, 2024 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 10 (part 1)
Thanks for that spelling correction. I tried not to make the characters too similar to their dragon counterparts but it might take a bit longer to put in additional subtle ...
Mar 20, 2024 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 1
Thanks for reviewing and I hope you continue to enjoy my story. HTTYD is my favorite story/movie and I did take heavy inspiration for Shadow from Toothless. I also was ...
Mar 20, 2024
