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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 5} Chapter 2
Yeah, there are a few things you may need to know and most of why he his here and what he is doing are explained in the last chapter of ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 5} Chapter 1
Thanks for your advice! This is simply part 5 (or Wing 5) of the same book so some things like Jarid being human and able to speak the dragon language ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 5} Chapter 1
Thanks for the review! I wasn't sure about the capitalization on a few things so thanks for pointing that out. As for how the Wing in the title works, this ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 4} Chapter 14
Thanks so much for the review! And sorry for the cliffhanger lol. I hope it was obvious that Airel made it out and will thus inform Jarid upon his return. ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 4} Chapter 13
I'm so glad that things came across the way I was hoping. I honestly worried about how I was going to help both Airel and Tempest become more accepting of ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 4} Chapter 12
I'm so excited to see your reviews again, and I see your reviewing style has improved once more. I love the poems at the end. Thanks for catching that type-O. ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 48
I know I'd love to see what happens next. Reviewing this book has helped me gain some consistency in my reviewing and develop my style to where it is today. ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 4} Chapter 11
I don't know how I didn't notice this review earlier! Thanks for your feedback. It's always appreciated. I do agree that the mention of Shadow's intention shifting is a bit ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 4} Chapter 7
Thanks for the review! So glad to see you again. I hope you enjoy my more recent chapters.
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 11
I am loving the lengths of the quotes so thanks for that. Just a few things to comment on. First, I mention earlier that all nobles are given training growing ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 4} Chapter 10
I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. The next few chapters are taking a while to write. I struggle a bit with chapters that are mostly character dialogue (or monologue). ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 4} Chapter 9
I really wanted an exciting transition into the next big quest for the dragonets. Those side, retrieve the medicine style, quests really make for great plot points to move the ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 4} Chapter 8
So glad you're back! I'm excited to see your reviews on the next two chapters. I always loved stealth video games and that was a big inspiration here. I really ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1) Chapter 10 (part 2)
The naming thing with Ethan/Ethen (I'm forgetting which I ended up using in the end at the moment) was pointed out by another review and I've corrected it for the ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 1} Chapter 10 (part 1)
You did a great job with the length of the quotes here. As you may have guessed there are a few common errors I made a lot. I'm trying to ...
Sep 28, 2024
