dragonfphoenix

This second chapter was quite the transition from the original, I'll admit. Backstory time! The first chapter was written because I was bored. I wrote it on my grands' computer ...

Glad you liked it. Yes, those terms will get explained later on. And the pronoun issue came from experimenting with a new punctuation style for quotations. But glad you liked ...

I shall try to get some more up soon. Glad you liked it!

Well, like I said this wasn't planned out. But if/when I do revise, I'll probably make some changes, including her age.

*most developmental stage of LIFE. I hate when that happens.

okay, glad I'm not alone. Wolves need a pack, you know?

[accidentally submitted this twice. deleted as needed.]

I think I missed the point of the symbolism. I liked the first line of the second stanza, but by the end of the poem I was still lost as ...

I like the recurring "Do you dare?" over and over and over. It left me going, "Do I dare WHAT?" Really cool poem.

I love the vivid imagery of this poem. You really captured the impression of a mentally unstable person quite well. The only thing that felt a little off was the ...

It is not anger, just frustration. Anger for me would come out in trashing the work; frustration comes out it explaining the problem whether you want to hear it or ...

I wrote this spontaneously, as with every chapter, and at the time that just felt right, since the teenage years are the most developmental stage of like. But actually Fiera ...

Very well written. You captured the depressed, 'woe is me' outlook quite well. It felt real reading this, almost like you'd been there and were just re-experiencing it once again. ...

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Heh, well this story is written entirely spontaneously, so it's whatever she chooses to have at her disposal. But glad you like it. And please don't forget to click the ...