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  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: I'm famous now

    Hey Dogs here to review! First off I really loved this poem, for me it was very emotional, and we will get into that a little later in this review, ...

    Jul 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Road Trip

    Hey Dogs here to review!!! Since there's not really much to nitpick we are just going to go into the fantastic part of the review, and talk about how great ...

    Jul 15, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Athazagoraphobia

    Hey Dogs here to review! I didn't see any errors, and that is really good, because we can go straight into on what I liked about your poem, and some ...

    Jul 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Far Away

    Hey Dogs here to review! First off, I really liked your poem, but I had to re-read it to understand it. First I'm going to start off with some nitpicks ...

    Jul 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lost an' Found

    Hey Dogs here to review! First off, I really enjoyed your poem, it is so true to me. Someone acts happy when really they're in pain and no one sees ...

    Jul 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Dresses and Politics Part 1: Chapter 1

    Hey, Dogs here to review! I'm going to start with nitpicks, and then I'll move on to the good part! Nitpicks 1) I was only a year older than Anne ...

    Jul 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Search For Peace Book 1 ~ The Great Separation Prologue

    Hey, Dogs here to review! I really liked this story, a great way to start it out, but I couldn't help, but notice a few errors, which I will point ...

    Jul 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Little Sister

    Hey, Dogs here to review! I really liked your poem! It was so cute, but you had a few errors that I'm going to point out! I will start off ...

    Jun 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Blank Sheet

    Hey, Dogs here to review! First off I really liked this story. I can't wait to read more! You will totally have to tell me when new chapters our posted! ...

    Jun 27, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: flute's tune.

    Hey, dogs here to review!! When I read this I thought of a person who is sitting on a porch listening to the whistling wind! I really liked the poem, ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Fantasy Re: All I Am Now

    Hey, Dogs here to review! I didn't seem to find any errors, but here are the things I really liked about the poem. 1) I like how every line started ...

    Jun 20, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Chickenish

    Hey, Dogs here to review. I thought this poem was quite amusing and a bit funny to be honest. I really liked how you were comparing you to being a ...

    Jun 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Simple Attraction

    Hey, Dogs here to review. First off, let me say that this poem had so much meaning and effort, but it was so simple. Sometimes simple poems are the best ...

    Jun 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Remember . . .

    Hey, Dogs here to review! First off, I really liked your poem. It was a beautiful piece of art. I didn't really find many nitpicks/errors, but I do have a ...

    Jun 18, 2016
  • Other » Other, Spiritual Re: Wisdom I received from my Mom

    Hey, Dogs here to review!!! Let's start off by saying that... Thanks for mentioning me in your writing. Let's start off with a few little errors, that can easily be ...

    Jun 17, 2016


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