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Haha THanks! I didn't even notice my stupid "to/go" mistake... i read over it like 5 times before i submitted it lol. Epic fail. Thanks for the post! TuckEr EllsworTh ...

oops... posted that twice lol

Thanks guys! And really? Haha i didn't think it was one of my better pieces haha. Thanks! TuckEr EllsworTh :smt032

REMASTERED! with few grammatical and punctuation corrections. Please tell me all if you like this way or the first way better. thanks! Folded in my arms you are a butterfly ...

Ok Thanks for the reply, given my dyslexic skills im suprised i didn't screw up even more lols. I'll figure something out thanks! TuckEr EllsworTh :smt032

Ok here are the corrections you suggested. I dont think i like it any better but do tell me what you guys think Folded in my arms you are a ...

Ok thanks for the suggestion! I'll figure something out TuckEr EllsworTh :smt032

He He thats the best thing I've heard from this story. Thanks for the replies. I fixed all the spacing and what not in word but when I copied and ...

*chuckles* okay thanks for the reply. I'll work on that

Lol thanks for the reply luv. okay i'll look into that. P.S: intresting picture u got there....

Yea Yea a little darker than what i have been writing but hey its my apart of my novel please read. i would love some critics

LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL OMFG U MAKE ME LAUGH!!!!!!! thanks 4 the comment but i have already written up 2 three chaps of this and i have been ...

My world is shattered. My life is broken. My heart is filled, with your desires and lies. Your bright blue eyes, now a crimson red. Your innocent face, now a ...

well just please give some suggestions =D

thankyou greyed shina for your suggestions they were very helpful. and ZOEY. for next time would you please actully give me a suggestion instead of just saying how bad it ...