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.......................................... AMAZING. THIS WAS GREAT I CAN'T FIND ANYTHING BAD I LOVED THE DESCRIPTION AND I THINK THAT THIS IS JUST PERFECT. however there are a few minor spelling issue

Hey ray, dogs here. THis is a great poem and unfortnitly i can't find much to criticize. however i found it very hard to understand the click and what you ...

Hey suspennz this is dogs right now i like your poem, however you need to use the proper grammer. you can't say "streetz" and on the first line i would ...

hey jasmine. this is dogs and i think that you poem is great However in the first stanza when you say "you can dent the pavement with the souls of ...

hey lilchoma. dogs here I think that this poem is good, but it needs some work. i think that in the first line the word shoeless makes it a little ...

hey angels, dogs here i think your poem is great i really like the discription and how you talk to the hermonica. ignore bludragon i understand this perfectly. however in ...

hey welcome. i am rather new my self. This was very impressive for someone your age. i think that this is a lot better than you other poem. however are ...

hi i don't think i have ever reviewed you but sometimes i can be a little rough hey raimunda i think that this is a great piece but it needs ...

.............................................. THAT WAS AMAZING ABSOLUTELY UNDESCRIBABLE. I CAN TOTALLY RELATE. this flow very well and the entire theme is very clear. i think that this is an absolute

this was amazing and i really enjoyed reading it. i like your imagination. i can't find anything wrong to tell you the truth. i think it flows well and you ...

well ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm so uhhhhhhhh i think that you need a more distinct subject with perhaps less profanity. and i don't get what you are trying to send as a subject. ...

wow kat that was amazing. however in the second stanza at the beginning you say "you put it out love" are you adressing love?? and is the "i used to ...

alyssa this is good but what is the point of the pink toes?? you jump from talking about a book to talking about your toes. you should focus on either ...

this is great Mandy but the rhythm is just a little off. and at the beginning when you said "i thought i was alive until i saw your face. that ...

i can totally relate to this and i think it is really good. however the first two lines what do you mean when you say "eyes wide shut" and "mouth ...