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Re: I watch you..
Hey Kayla! Dogs here with your review today! So this is a great piece and a great start for a poem. You use a lot of repetition that both works ...
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Re: Dear Ms. Nostalgia
Seraph..... were you really worried that this poem wasn't any good....? Like really......... BECAUSE THIS IS AMAZING! So much imagery and so much description, i love the entire eerie and ...
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Re: Dreamer's Prison
Hey Amazon! Dogs here with your review today! Excellent piece of poetry! I really love this kinda abstract topic about dreams because dreams can often be a really easy thing ...
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Re: Eden Part - I
Hey Baron! Dogs here with your review of the day! This poem is really good, such strong imagery and I really love how you rooted all the imagery, description, and ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: 24 Hours
Hey Mist! Dogs here with your review. So... Morning Mist.... you have reviewed several pieces of my work and I haven't gotten a chance to review one of yours. So ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Is it You?
Hey Chezka! Dogs here with your review today! So this is a great poem. I really like the random sense of rhyming how it is in sometimes and how sometimes ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Vanishing Traintrack
Oh I have experienced that feeling before! I laughed at this poem. such a great topic! Hey painting, dogs here with your review today. I really loved this piece which ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Done.
Hey Amber! Dogs here with your review today! Oh and just building off of what rain said, you really need to capitalize all of your "I" or none of them. ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: -
Hey Artsy! Dogs here with your review today! THis is a great piece of poetry! I really love the imagery you use and how you connect all of that to ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: passenger seat
Hey Dream! Dogs here with your review for the day. Dream.... you stun me yet again. This is such a fantastic piece. This officially puts you in my top 5 ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Girl at the Door
Hey Live out loud!!!!! Dogs here with your review for the day! This is a great piece, I really love the imagery you throw in here and how you really ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Curse of the Consolation Prize
Hey Anna!!!!! Dogs here with your review for the day! Excellent piece! I love how smoothly this flows and how you tell your story about always getting second place. It ...
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Re: Rain
Hey Mirasol!!!!! Dogs here with your review today!!! So this is a great piece about rain, it has lot of imagery which I love. You also use a wide variety ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: The Prototype (stick man playing alone outside)
Hey Ajt! Dogs here with your review today! Oh man I got to come up with a better nick name for you... Any ideas? Because if not I'll just give ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: where reality wilts
Hey Ancient! Dogs here with your review today! Great piece you got here, very strong topic idea and it is very originally so good job on that. I think the ...
Dec 9, 2011