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Hello Rose! Dogs here with your review today! Ok firstly I like your avatar :) good choice there. Ok now onto your writing. Firstly your grammar and word choiceage is ...

Ok Iki, lovely poem as always but firstly you need to pay attention to directions. One of the rules of my contest was that you CANNOT use any of the ...

Hello Sparkle! Dogs here with your review toeday! Ok lets jump in now shall we? So good poem here, cute idea with an intresting ending. I like the start of ...

Hello Magpie! Dogs here with your review today. Congratulations for being the first person to post their writing for my contest. I am actually shocked and incredibly impressed at how ...

Howdy doo! Dogs here with your requested, terribly sorry I didn't get to it sooner. Anywho I love the imagery of your beginning, I think it's incredibly cute and you ...

Hello there monkey! Dogs here with your review today. Okey dokey so we gots lots to talk about here with this piece. First and foremost WELCOME TO YWS! I do ...

Hello life! Can I just call you Scrat? Cause he's my favorite character from that movie :). Anywho dogs here with your review today. Ok so one of the things ...

Hello Hannah Banana! I'm excited to finally review some excellent work of yours :). Ok to start off I really like this poem, it's short and clever and too the ...

Hello Dizzy! Dogs here with your review today. Ok so good poem you have here, it's a great start. I like the fact that this piece is more of a ...

Hello Cailey! Dogs here with your review today. Ok so you have a good starting paragraph, leaving potential for a great story, although the last line of the first paragraph ...

"They who have endured six years of torture and now resembled skeletons..." Ok this line sounds a little awkward. Maybe you mean "Those.." instead of they. Unless you're talking about ...

Howdy doo Jo, Dogs here with your review today. We got a lotta work to do so lets dive in shall we? Ok firstly, this is not in a poetry ...

Hello infinity! Dogs here with your review today. Ok, so this poem has a good idea and point, saying that hero's can really come from anywhere. Your lines might be ...

Hello moon! Dogs here with your review. Alright I really like your writing style, it's easy to read and not littered with imaging and has just the right amount of ...

Once again my lovely lady, WELCOME TO YWS! If you ever need any help or a review please post a message on my wall or send me a PM any ...