destinybeal

This poem is very beautiful and also hilarious! I like how the story flows and I can imagine it in my head, yet you allow the readers to fill in ...

Hey! I really enjoy the tone in this poem; it sounds like the narrator is pondering and the tone emphasizes the overarching theme of feeling lost and hopeless in love. ...

Heyo! I really enjoyed the concept of this story, but I feel like it can go a little bit further! I see the potential to imbue some more philosophical elements ...

Hello! I absolutely love the voice in this poem. It's very consistent and strong, and the confident tone really accentuates the theme of the poem. I like the repetition of ...

I enjoy the repetition of the word "thought" in the first line, though "that the" feels a little jumbled to say out loud. I would consider removing "that" just to ...