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Re: Our Room
I really do like it!Its just that you I think you should put more description of the main characters situation you know?Plus,in the beginning there seems to be a bit ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Fantasy
I personally really liked it. To me it shows how a fantasy jumps from subject to subject y'know?
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: The Love for the Lost
Wow thank you all so much I totally get what you guys are talking about... and yes I WAS a lovesick teen and I thought this was good allwell though! ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: Smokin' on Sesame Street (Part 1)
Well I guess the first thing to say is that it takes stones to take such a wild turn on a childs show...if I knew that some day I would ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: My Sign is Vital, My Hands are Cold (kind of re-written)
Gosh that was so deep and sad i almost cried *teardrop* I swear it sounds like something straight out of a book! Welldone!
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: After Class
holy flipper that's steamy yet so amazing! It really gives you a visual idea of what's going on!
Jul 25, 2010
