deliroast

Thank you! This has helped a lot.

I had edited this one and re-uploaded it under a similarly titled name. Sorry for the confusion but I know this one sucks because it was straight from the pages ...

thanks! Definitely will do that.

So basically, just "slowing it down" and adding more to the chapter would make it better? I can do that, it did seemed a bit rushed to me at the ...

Hello There...... I loved the story. It had me attached at minute one. But for some reason I thought Gray was a male......I don't know.....anyway just some small minor problems ...

Hello There..... I don't know but I just have this feeling that this should be a poem, and if it was it would be the best poem in the world!! ...

Hello There...... Finally, the last chapter......(not to sound like I didn't enjoy reading.....because I did!) but I am not going to make this a review because Aley and Ionut got ...

Hello There...... Love the story and it has a awesome plot twist.....I should say. :P It has great figurative language and meaning. Good work!!

This poem made me laugh so much.

Hello There...... Sorry to see that there is no poem here. I'm sure it would have been a good one with a title like that. :)

Thanks! I and I certainly will.

Hello there..... I love this poem. It reminds me of myself because I to do not like the girly, girly stuff that society is pushing on us. However my favorite ...

Yes hello there..... The poem was very good and all but it is named Breathe and the poem seems mostly about seasons. You had great word choice and very vivid ...