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Thank you for your review, Traunt! I was on the edge of my seat waiting to see what your thoughts were hehe. This was the chapter that almost wrote itself, ...

Hey Therese! Thanks for your review, and good luck running away from that dog! ;-) A couple of things, Viper is a psychic. I believe I wrote about his powers ...

Noted! (all of it) There are definitely parts that I was thrilled about writing, and parts that I hurried through to get to the next bit that excited me. The ...

I see... yes, I get your meaning. I think in general I need to fill more meat in to the chapters, it's a bit thin on descriptions as well as ...

Hmmm... *looks under chair*... not sure...

Love your reviewing style! Thank you very much for taking the time to hunt for bacon in my neck of the woods :-)

Yay, you're on my side! :-P You read Graham's POV exactly how I wanted it to be read. I wanted to hold back on the details of Alexia's secret and ...

Thanks for the link, it helped me. (NOT "I was helped by it" :-) ). I think it has been an unconscious habit for the most part, but I will ...

Awesome! :-D Grinning unstoppably from ear to ear now! I wrote that mother-daughter scene coz I didn't want to just write about broken people. Sure, Naomi's life isn't perfect (absent ...

Thanks Tanya! ;-)

Hehe, so one of the major things I have to work on is setting. I'll admit that I have been avoiding it because I wanted to spend more time on ...

Hi Tanya! Thanks again for the review, I'll keep your points in mind when rewriting. With Alexia's relationship with her step father, I wanted it to be misplaced anger. Alexia ...

Yay! Thank you so much, would love to get your rounded perspective on the overall plot! Keep them reviews coming and I'll keep loving them! And I'll keep writing too ...

Thanks for your review :-) Could you explain what you meant by action vs reaction?

I am always so humbled by your fandom Traunt :-D Once again you ask key questions, of which it is my solemn duty to answer. Foreshadowing! I hear even the ...