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Thank you! I'm glad it meant something to you. The thing is, hormones aren't an excuse. There are many perfectly decent ways to approach a girl, that don't come off ...

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Hi Nov! My favourite source of inspiration is Google Images! I drew the bird from a photograph chosen out of at least 50 peregrine falcon stills. The lettering was indeed ...

Eeeeek! I love you! Thanks so much for your review. This felt like the strongest chapter for me to write as well, because it was the point when the characters ...

Hi Cricket! Thank you for your awesome review! I actually can't wait for you to read 15 now, anxious to see what you think! Arg, the redundancy... I would say ...

Ok, now that my tears of joy have subsided, ahem! You're not the first to comment that I held back on the level of power display in this scene. That's ...

You have no idea what a nerd grin I have when you guys fight over a character that came out of my mind . If I ever start thinking that ...

Traunt calls you the best nitpicker, you call her the best nitpicker haha! Ok, with Jake, I will say nothing... only that you will see whether or not your suspicions ...

Thank you!!! I'm on my first draft, so I hope that my rewrites will be free of spelling and grammar mistakes as well as any weak language use. Glad you ...

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Yup, that helps! Thanks. And that eye is so good, it's creepy...

This is an Error Message. Why can't we just delete it, YWS?

Firstly, you found the source image??? What wizardry is this! 8-O Thank you for the review haha. You're right! What's missing is contrast in shading. I have one question though, ...

Go ahead and do your style! I think a review works if the reviewer is taking the care to read through and gives me notes on what they think I ...

Hehe, if this is short, are your long reviews longer than the work itself? Lol don't worry, you gave me lots to consider, and sprinkled plenty of compliments to make ...