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Hi Sage! Thanks for your feedback, I'm glad you liked my story! This was my first shot at historical fiction, so I'm glad it appealed to an avid history person ...

Hi ED, thank you very much for this in-depth review. I'll admit it was somewhat intimidating to read at first, but I remind myself that this is exactly why I ...

A way to get around your impatience to get to the good stuff is to write the good stuff first. No one says you have to write a story in ...

Thank you for your appreciation Kev! I practically giggled and bounced, because you have read the story exactly how I intended it to be perceived. I'm so glad you think ...

Thank you Tenyo for your great review! I think I see what you mean about getting into the reader's heads. I will consider all 5 senses in my descriptions - ...

Thanks Kisha! Glad you enjoyed it

Ooooh! dn from umop, I get it now! You're even cleverer than I suspected! I would hate to be responsible for you dumbing the poem down on my account... but ...

No. These are insults thinly disguised as poetry. No matter what they've done, threatening someone reveals the villain in you, not them. Calm down and rethink this 'poem' and you ...

Thank you Veeren! I'm glad the signing off bit was not lost on you ;-) I certainly hope you find all my writing as easy to connect with. Then, I've ...

Thank you for your review! I will let you know when I post new work. :-) But note, I write in British English, so "apologising" is correct. I also say ...

Thank you so much birds :-) You will find more of my writing in my YWS portfolio, and on my blog . Your feedback is always welcome and highly valued!

Thank you so much birds :-) You will find more of my writing in my YWS portfolio, and on my blog . Your feedback is always welcome and highly valued!

Arg, can't believe I didn't reply to this! Really sorry about that Tanya. I hope you at least vaguely remember the script, I removed it to limit the chances of ...

My loooooong overdue reply (I have reasons, but they smell suspiciously like excuses...) Thank you for your review! Poetry has always been something that hits me from time to time ...

Thank you for your generous feedback Fire, Cookie, and Vyper :-) IrishFire, the narrator of the poem is aware of how rude she sounds (hence the apology), but prefers honesty ...