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Thanks. I'm not very well with grammar, especially with dialogue, so I use YWS like an editor I guess. Minn is hiding something, but he's very rushed. He mentions Lucinda's ...

Wow, thank you so much! I'm actually so happy you said that, thank you so much! *blushes*

I totally see where you are coming from by saying that you write for yourself more than the audience. When I write poetry I do the same thing. I think ...

Ah, okay! Thanks!!! Here just let me try it real quick. So I hope this is crossed out. And this should be italicized And hopefully, this is bold

Okay sweet! Also, I've seen people make comments but cross out their text/italicize/bold/colour their text. Do you know how to do that? It looked really cool. I wasn't sure if ...

Thank you! I'll just reply to some of your overall points. (1) I can understand where you are coming from, and I do have some trouble with making a character ...

I've been told once before that someone was worried it would get a little cliche, but I promise you, I have my own twist. The disguise is that there is ...

Thank you! I've been editing as I go over, and I think all your notes are well explained. I'm glad that the paragraph about the coffee cups was to your ...

I did! Actually I made it so that it says she could feel the bridge planks under the wheels, just so it's a little more noticeable that they've gone onto ...

Thanks! I'll keep your tips in mind!

I actually found your comments quite helpful. I can understand where you're coming from. I've been editing the chapter while reading the reviews, so I'll probably put up "Improved Version ...

Thanks for the tips. I'll keep them in mind. Though it does say in the 4th paragraph that they drive onto a bridge.

Of course

Thanks! Oh! I do have one question! How do you copy quotes from the piece into your review? I never could find out how to do that...

It didn't really have any specific separation with stanzas, so I just left it. It was how I made it when I first wrote it, but thank you for the ...