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Love. This poem is about someone looking down at their crush, and their crush caught them look at him/her. The MC hid, the other kid laughed and then they became ...

Very entertaining. I liked this a lot. And I've never heard of a "lucky pair of glasses" so this was something new entirely. I liked this a lot.

Thanks!

Don't tell anyone, but I felt like trolling and this came out of nowhere. xD But I think it's the best poem that I've ever written.

Uh, chocolate chips? 8D That's cool man.

Oh! I see! You find different words in peoples names. That's cool. At the time, I thought it was weird, cuz I was new here, sorta. But go ahead and ...

That's alright. I was just wondering why you called me 'Oles'.

I'm that type of person.

Finally! Somebody who DOESN't criticize me for my grammar! You also spotted why I named the characters sugar cane!

Did you pay attention to the end? That might explain why he got sick.

Well, it's she's 13 that she can't do anything in the past. If you're 13 and say "The world is going to end by zombies!" What would you do? You ...

That'd be helpful. I've read a lot of English books, and I think I can spot one now from the first few sentences.

I never thought of it that way... but I know what you got right. Hehe.

I don't just read, I interpret what the author is trying to say. It's a little easy once you do it a lot.

Well, it still sounds good. I like both versions. I'm Asian, so naturally I would go to chinese mooncake. I just like Asian things. :)