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Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!

Thanks for reviewing! To address a few of these points: the punctuation definitely needs work, thank you for pointing it out. The stanza about a boy fighting to be himself: ...

Hey! Thanks for the review! The changing stanza length actually kind of bugged me too, to be honest, but I couldn't figure out a way to fix it and still ...

I liked this piece. It very nicely puts into words the damage people can do to others without even thinking about it, through their carelessness. I especially liked the fourth ...

Thanks for the review! I'll definitely work on the emotional aspect!

OMG. This is your favorite poem!? That's great! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. I hope you have a good day too!

I'm glad someone caught the meaning behind the mask thing. I initially wasn't sure about writing that part, since I thought people might not get it, but I'm glad you ...

Hey! Thanks for taking the time to review. The first part was definitely more about life in general, while the second was about a specific instance. I'm glad you liked ...

This is actually really cool. The repetition was well done and the rhymes flowed well without feeling forced. I can totally imagine this with some really loud guitar and drumming ...

Thanks for reading. I tried to emphasize the bad times as well as the good, because that was just as much a part of my friend's story as the rest. ...

Thanks for taking the time to write all that. As far as vocabulary goes, I wholeheartedly agree with you. I really should've spent more time editing this, but I published ...

Thanks for reviewing. This is a nonfiction piece, but you didn't kill my friend, so please don't apologize. The point on similes and imagery is a very good one. I ...

Hey-thanks for your review. Sorry I made you cry, but the poem is a sad one, after all. My friend had leukemia. I didn't want to put it in the ...

Thanks for your review. On the stanza point, I don't know why this keeps happening, but I'll type up a poem in stanzas, and when I post it, they're gone. ...

Hey! I liked this poem, but the last line felt rather weak to me. The first part, "In all honesty" didn't seem necessary, and made the line weaker. The line ...