deathwave1

I loved this. It's a very relatable poem, because I'm pretty sure every writer has experienced this at some point. The rhyme scheme was simply and easy to follow, and ...

This was great. The first part did an excellent job of painting a picture of what's occurring. That was very strong imagery. The second half of the poem was deeper ...

I loved this! Every metaphor was well thought out and made sense. My only real recommendations are to break it into stanzas and add punctuation. Right now, the poem is ...

This is a seriously powerful poem. War isn't all it's hyped up to be, and I think this represents what soldiers might be thinking really well. The lines about your ...

I loved the symbolism in this poem. Each stanza seemed to bring me further into her depression. In the fourth stanza, when you say that the sweater is coming undone? ...

This is great. The Harry Potter references are amazing, (number 12 XD) and all are so very true. I feel like poking fun at cliches in popular writing is very ...

I absolutely love this poem. It provides an amazing look into growing up alongside a member of the LGBT community. My closest friend is gay, and this poem almost brought ...