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Re: His resemblance..
hey TahaT11n, Are you considering making this a haiku? Why 8 syllables for the second line? If it's a haiku, typically, the first line and third line are 5 syllables ...
Jun 29, 2016 -
Re: "You're not that beautiful."
Hey acm, Caught in whirlwind of love and despair, huh? Heart-wrenching! For some clarification, can you tell me what you mean by "You say that you could melt in my ...
Jun 29, 2016 -
Re: every drop of water like a stone
Wooooooooow, Lareine, Just wanna say: one of THE most sensual poems I've read in a very long while!! I don't know if I can call this a review! More of ...
Jun 29, 2016 -
Re: How naive I was
Hey there, RadiantShadow! I get sort of a crumbling feeling from this piece! A feeling of disappointment and hopelessness too! So, I see some repetiton, yay! And some rhyming at ...
Jun 28, 2016