deaducky8

Yeah I noticed that.. I didn't mean to, any idea how to delete the other one?

Oh dear, I think I've been insulted. Ask me if I care.

Ok, leeches, I'll take your silly advice. Except the black rose.. she annoyes me to no end. Also, Gods is staying Gods, what if I believe in more than one? ...

There, fixed and added lines. Happy?

Getting better? I've posted all of my poems at the same time, why does everyone say I'm 'getting better'?? In any case, I know it's short, I didn't want to ...

1. It is a song, who needs punctuation? 2. The Black Rose, ("I respectfully disagree with your opinion," is what you should have said. Flaming is not tolerated. -Grif.)

I know I know I wasn't really into this one when I wrote it (I tried, really I did) I was in the middle of class (heh) But thank you

You can tell me how to fix my work when you write it. Thank you, Goodnight

I know it is child-like. I wrote this piece when I was ten. It's a bit scary when you think about it. I mean.. Why was I thinking about things ...

Oh? And how do you suppose I should change it?? By the way, would you like to take a guess as to what she is?