davidgma

Thanks

Thank you for taking the time to review this. I had a feeling there were some tense changes but was unable to find them.

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This is my first review in awhile so forgive me if I'm rusty This is wonderful. The wording and imagery is absolutely exquisite, and you have such a well defined ...

Thank you for the review. I will make sure to break up the paragraphs when re-writing and putting it to paper.

honestly thank you i never get any critisim i can work with when i write and its refereshing to find somone will to slog through my horrendus 2 am grammar ...

you have a disticnt writing style somthing alongs the lines of riordon or collins. I was abosulutely hooked from the beggining of the story.

this was really cute.