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At night you bite me, I flush, and you curl like a leaf in my palm; we lay down to rise without a word spoken. great lines Nice job.

I love the title. It makes me imagine the painful sting of each and every thought i experience. Great choice. Love the poem and opening stanzas as well as the ...

Don't preach to me Don't knock on my door When I come back I don't want to see your face "Amen........................." best expression of a typical person's reaction today. Well ...

It is not a poem, it is a limerick originally.

Once there lived MARTH, a great prince.The thought of a date made him wince! But then he met IKE, Whom he found out he liked, his emotions decided to fight ...

Once there lived MARTH , a great prince. The thought of a date made him wince! But then he met IKE , Whom he found out he liked, his emotions ...

You’re the devil’s soldier Turned from God . no comments necessary. love t,

love the poem so much. no changes needed. Perfection in writing poetry, bravo and keep writing. possible title could be Lost Without You

Te amo el poema, es muy verdad.

there will be more today but not now..........

I never said that I'd be there for you, that I'd care for you. I never meant that I would stay with you, I never wanted to. Great opening

I did my best, With what I possessed; I used my mind but the answers were hard to find

Among the worst, are those who are ignorant and confused and these are prone to judge are bereft without a clue. new second stanza

The usually bored-looking, acne-ridden guy at the fish and chip shop watched me with interest. The few scattered people all spared me long glances as I picked up the pace ...