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Re: Christmas
Coloured candy canes hung off its thick branches. I listened to the Christmassy songs happily. Breathing in , I could smell the delicious Christmas dinner cooking. A turkey bulged with ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Shadows
I love this poem. It is a unique reflection of the stillness in life. Keep it up. In the deathly silence of the night, Shadows creep out From the closet ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Our Stalock
I like it. It is different for sure and funny; as well as very loyal to the team . I like the fact it sounds like a song, or at ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: The Suns Betrayal
Wow. Great poem. Love the intensity in the tone and how it is used to create emotional responses. The poem itself displays the talent possessed by the author, who i ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Filled
overall great poem. The sun bearing down on the river We watch the water stand still, I want to remember The way your eyes kill. The way your eyes doth ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Added Scene, WOLF BROTHER
He was just lying there. Doing nothing. Torak’s dad was on the hard, cobbled ground with dig marks and slashes across his face. Torak felt helpless, with himself in immense ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Black Bird
Nothing more than an amazing poem. nothing needs to be changed for this to be better. I understand everything said and can identify with what you said. This is talent ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: The Good Seed: Part 3
Food, after a lack-thereof, is a powerful narcotic. My body floods with endorphins, every part of me blushes and flutters. The air sweeps over my skin in Technicolor, cool bursts ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: deleted
“I’ll stop being an evil bastard when it stops making you laugh.” I stopped laughing abruptly, and he frowned. “Dyl...” I hesitated, but his hazel eyes urged me to go ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Down the road.
The dream was the same as it always was lately. Three days without a shower and even in his sleep he could smell feet and feverish sweat, but still the ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: A Void
The walls have trapped me Contained inside a void Your "wisdom" is ignorance You prey off people's fears But your strengths aren't my weaknesses Your long gaze into a lifeless ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Chapter One part 2 and Chapter 2 part 1
The only person who met my eyes on my way to the library was a boy, about 11 years of age, covered with dust and grime, hair brown and eyes ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: We All Have A History Behind
was waiting for it; I knew that he would come back for me. It’s not just a dream when you see yourself haunted, it is being haunted even if you’re ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Chapter Two
Overall, a wonderful story; cannot wait for the next chapter.I fixed the misspellings for you. For the hundredth time, Anna, I couldn’t help it! You had to move! I wasn’t ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Taking the miracle of words for granted
Tranquility was born on the 21st of September 1994 in a small hospital in Britain. She was half an ounce above being declared underweight and that half ounce was probably ...
Oct 18, 2011
