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dasiamari

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Always stick together Chapter 4

    Oh my god! I really Love your novel when are you going to write more? This was really Intense.

    Sep 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Johnny...So Very Lonely

    I really liked this. For some odd reason I thought of The Child Called It. With out the abuse. Well thats all I had to say. Keep writing ~dasiamari

    Jul 21, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Dark Turning chapter Two - The right one

    I wrote a bit more to this sooo...

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Storm

    I like this. You already got a very good review so nothing to say about that. What I want to say is ( maybe its just me) your comment above ...

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Wisdom of the Wisdom Tooth

    I liked this alot. Keep it up.

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Trees

    Thanks!

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Here and There

    I like this alot. I look foward to reading more!!

    Jun 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Soul Mate

    I love this so much!

    Jun 24, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: you got one more chase

    you got one more chanse cause baby i cant take it anymore and i mean it cause baby baby i mean it i mean it iii meeen iiittt cause baby ...

    Jun 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Black Sword

    I really enjoyed your story (Honestly =D) At first I didnt see the whole Sci-fi thing but then I did. I really do like this continue writing

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Rainbow (Chapter 1)

    I like this. It really to short to review but I'll try. I like Rainbow. Even in this short little piece she has a personality. I don't like Rainee so ...

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Dinnertime According to Puppies

    I love this. I could really picture the puppy running and sliding. ( Maybe because I've seen the commerical? ) No I think I could picture it because you have ...

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Eclipse (Prologue)

    I really like this. Is there going to be more? Because this doesn't really explain what an Epsilon egg is. I get that they are rare but why? Why does ...

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Sun God

    Thank you all for reviewing. But saying I had no respect for myself and that its unorignal and comparing my characters to wet cardboard is going WAY to far. I ...

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Hearts Like Islands

    Okay I like this. BUT why is she on the island? Why Is she a librainan? Kind of confusing there. Other than that I really liked this .

    Jun 7, 2011


“Writing fiction is the act of weaving a series of lies to arrive at a greater truth.”
— Khalid Hosseini, Author