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Thanks! I'm still tweaking it out, so maybe it will end up longer!

Thanks

I really liked this poem. I was once told there was an Architect who desired perfection, and built his home out of stars and novas, unconcerned by the petty wars ...

Poop that posted twice >.

I can’t start on my own, but I can dance and leap and tease and laugh! ((Laugh? I understand the rest but fire doesn't really laugh in anyway.)) I can ...

Loved it

Quotation marks around what people say (" ") would make it easier to read. Thought its your choice. I loved the piece.

I really liked this! Review at a later time? I think yes :)

Llama) Periods, capitalization, spelling errors, commas, and chatspeak. Other than that I loved it. The idea was great, though slightly hard to read. But I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED the over all piece. ...

Hi! Okay I liked your song and the over-all idea, but I agree with gingercinomin. The song seems like its doesn't fit excatly together, like its being forced. I liked ...

And you are as good as me!

Me and Taylor Swift write about the same kinda things 50% of the time so yea. And I did say White Horse in the song lol

Its not about anyone llama! LOL and I did post most of those songs!! LOL No yelling at me! LOLOLOL

How do I delete the above comment?? I hate when ppl hack my YWS -_- I will get you matt!

I really liked this! It flowed smoothly. My favorite was the third stanza. "Don't you know that war is coming? Can't you see the armies gather? Can't you feel the ...