darkshadow13

This is a great story. I could feel your emotions and I like the style of writing. Good job and keep writing like this, it really kept me feeling like ...

Thank you for doing that! I really appreciate it! I'm sorry the format did not work correctly

This is not in the right form it was supposed to be like a poem how do I fix it??

This situation descibes me and you did a really good job. :) It was well writen and I liked how you made the story from two points of view. Good ...

this is great it reminds me about my family, especially the part of where you talk about your brother. It's great how you can find strenght from your family, from ...

good job that was well put together and very simple but nice :) Great job keep it up!!

great job, you really decribed them and it was really well crafted keep writing poetry! Because you are great at it!! :D

good job I could see the whole thing in my mind you used great words and it was a great story, very entertaining and keeps your interest. Also you had ...

good writing i could really see this happening :)