darko.demark666

Submit me your voices, your legend, YOUR LEGEND? Where the God of ancient pillars, Crumbling red stone from his lips, Smiled to his hands, loving, carnivorous. A word, uttered from ...

Last Christmas, Why comma? I trusted you with my heart, I placed it in your hand, And then I wrote you a song… But little did I know, You sold ...

arrogance is no excuse I walked in the halls waltzed , really, Nice idea. But when I first saw this I thought that you consider us(readers) stupid. You could wrote ...

In a year. The world My world If you say "the" world you can't say that this is your world... Or put a comma.. Is rocked back and forth. World---forth--->not ...

She stalks. She springs. And with her brings A breath of midnight air. This verse is doom for rhythm of the poem so far... With prey in jaw She turns ...

You told me it was fine You said I’d be alright And with you there at my side How could I follow the night? Why not fight instead of night? ...

You have so much potential and the best thing about it is that you are using that in the best way you can... Outrageous unique and original "thing" you wrote. ...

Welcome to YWS. We hope you like our concept and the whole idea of this. If you have any questions feel free to send me a message... ~ I know ...

See, now here's the thing... Haruno said: "Your rhythm is corny." I say it's terrible. You actually ruined(or wounded) a perfectly good poem. Not just good, but great poem(if we ...

I listen heavy metal too. Actually I don't, I feel heavy metal. But my philosophy about war isn't quite the same as yours. I'm total opposition of war propaganda. People ...

to take a sparrow, to fly a leaf, to live a life in disbelief great to make a crane, to see the light, the final blow in the final fight ...

P.S. You can find some good poetry here also(with reviews :);))... I found some pieces that can easily be compared with some of famous writers. Also see Suzanne's "guide through ...

See, I don't know what you're flying towards and how is flying going to save you from anything? Well said! :idea: :idea:

Shreds My heart strings tugs as I remember you. WOW! Why is it I can only write my poetry in the peak of [s]the[/s] moments of falling in love with ...

Soul Forms I nominate this title as the most innovative (original) on YWS. I am the soul-supporter, here to comfort your mighty spirit as you rise to the future greatness ...