darkfictionboys

love it. nice m. night twist in the end. keep it up.:)

you're an amazing writer. short but to the point, in a way. beautiful way with words, considered poetry? it made me imagine everything, very good. keep writing, don't stop.loved it. ...

I liked this. It was depressingly beautiful. Very well conveyed and written. Im not good with grammar,so sorry. The person commenting before me was right though. Bye!

and another thing, this is in no way like my life. at all.

thanks for your reviews, and I'm sorry, but this piece is only in this category because i put it in the wrong one. i was going to put this into ...

hey, d.f.b. here. first off, love linkin park, and love your prof. pic. i like this piece. its imaginative, and the way you described the dream to reality part was ...

hey, d.f.b. here. this story made me laugh. was it really a true story? what place were you living in? well, anyway, i liked it, the way on how you ...

loved it! i wish my brother had told me to do that and i had actually found one!! by the way, love your name, ladypurple. i love the color purple. ...

amazing story, short, but sweet and to the point, and that point is love!!! i love how you made the situation where her friend liked him too!!!! that's a good ...

thanks for the help meggwriting!! and the review!!! i appreciate it! I'll fix it!:)

i loved how i could put myself in the story. but i feel really sad about the baby dying part. the graphic description of what he looked like after he ...