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I found this poem particularly amusing. It was well written and had nice structure and speaks a terrifying truth, which is, literature is becoming a dying art. I completely agree ...

This is an odd poem. I thought at some parts it was decent, but at others it just didn't seem right. To start Took longer than I expected, but it ...

I simply stumbled across yhis poem as I was scrolling odwn the page and liked the title. Anyway what I am going to say has been said before. This poem ...

I thoroughy enjoyed this poem. Its two contrasting parts speaking of the same being flow in a wa that makes the poem great. The first part hatred, anger, sorrow, really ...

I am in agreement with above comments. This is a very powerful poem, filled with sorrow and biting truth. I know that exact feeling, and I do disagree with your ...

Haha nicolerosebieber said speechless, get it? Haha. Anyway great poem, reminds me of many of mine, deep, dark, emotional, complex, yet simple. But simple in a way that creates new ...

Ah yes the quintessential angst ridden poem filled with hatred and that rhetorical answer the person asking does not want to know. I remember those poems. Anyway this poem was ...

I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. It was an explosion of emotion and imagery that evoked not only the haunting desire for peace, but savagery, and dehumanization, but at the same ...

I agree that the rhyme scheme is a bit off and throws the poem off a bit, but overall I saw the emotion and passion that went into this work. ...

I agree with others. This poem is very short, but it calls for the reader wonder, and ponder what became of the person, how they truly felt, and what really ...

I concur. It is a short piece, but sometimes those pieces make us feel the greatest. Those pieces invoke in us memories from our past ranging from things lost to ...

I enjoyed this poem very much just one mistake. mysery is misspelled. should me misery. Good job. Good poem. good idea. It does make people think. I quite enjoy morbid ...

I agree with the above. The poem overall is good, but the inconsistent rhyming throws the poem off a bit and weakens some of the great things about. Overall it ...

I liked this poem somewhat, but agreeing with other comments the line format is a bit weird and stops the natural flow of the poem. It made me think it ...

I think the idea for this poem was good, but the execution of it was mundane. The main for that is what seems to be a lack of emotion. There ...