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And yes, the suspense is toned down at the end, since Mamoru and Amane are trying not to scare Akari in her weak state.

No one's ever given me so many reviews this fast^^

Wow, two reviews in a day...Thanks a lot!

Thanks for the review! Now I can edit in peace~ (I couldn't figure out which parts I had to change).

(Stay awake Kyre!) I mean- this is a suspenseful chapter. The "stranger that is as familiar as a friend" line was the one I liked best^^

Here I am, noticing the cyan color of the text only after I see the wiki link...This poem is very insightful. It feels almost like academic prose, due to the ...

This chapter is fairly short, so there's not too much to edit. If I had to make a suggestion, maybe you could replace "people" with another word, as it makes ...

What's going to happen to Ashe...? (eagerly awaits the next chapter)

Like I said, you're great. No need for you to worry about "imperfections" at all.

My novel "Sleepless" is heavily based on anime (and light novels), if I haven't told you this before. Please have a look at it if you're interested (you don't need ...

Good riddance to him~

Ch. 3 is the only chapter still stuck in the green room for some reason...Would you like to leave a review, if you need some extra points?

this chapter based on that disaster?

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This poem was a bit confusing to read, in a good way. It really felt like I was seeing someone's dream. Perhaps this is only because I'm not a good ...

I'm sorry I can't give decent reviews...But my main thought while reading this chapter was, "I feel you, Ashe. Really..." Somehow, Ashe's situation feels relatable (getting your portfolio erased). The