curiousvampire

I thought that your story was well written and creative. There was nothing wrong that I could see so all in all it was a solid piece of literature. I ...

OMG!!! I think I'm in love! Your story began dramatically and ended with simple cliff hanger that leaves the reader hunger more.......much more. It was a basic cliche, but it ...

I've read most of Darren Shan's work and Demonata was the first book of his that I read and became obsessed with so I just had to review.I loved your ...

I'm a big fan of anything fantasy, so I had to review your work. Since Lauren already pointed out your mistakes, I guess I'm here to inspire and tell you ...

Hey Kerza, I'm here to review. This chapter was stunning! I really couldn't find anything remotely wrong in this piece. Mr Landsin reminds me of my algebra teacher, except better.Ayden ...

Hey Kerzarwolf, your vampire friend is here to review. Wow! Things are getting interesting A great follow up to the first was believable and simple. I agree with Rip you ...

I read the first couple of chapters and love them and this one was well.......WOW!I expected her fiance to be coming back but not so quickly. I really felt bad ...

Hey I like the story so far, especially with the vampire mania thing-even though I love them,but I also love werewolves-it was really original and realistic.You reeled me in from ...

Hey DirtyMoney welcome to YWS and I enjoyed your story. What a great start to enter YWS world. I liked it, it was something new and deadly so I just ...

First off I would Like to say welcome YWS! Second your work is an unreadable block, can you please at least indent your work and I do agree with DirtyMoney ...

God your story is long,but I got through it though. It was interesting and your descriptions were vivid and exciting, I actually felt I was there as one of the ...

To put it simply it was a sweet heartfelt goodbye :cry:.There was nothing wrong except the misspelled 'Mary' part, so all in all I really like it and hope there ...

Sadly I got to say this story was....... awsome. I L.O.V.E.D it :D . There were no mistakes I spotted since LavedeBlue and RangerHawk already pointed them out except for ...

Good begining. The only problem that I had was lowercased i's and the word still being spelled wrong, but all in all it was really reminded me of myself and ...

Thank you for the awesome review and here's one in return. I've read the prologue and they were some mistakes but Aspiring already pointed them out.Here you also have some ...