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Hi Ranger Hawk, I just have to say I loved this poem. It's the longest poem to keep my attention from the first word to the last. It's very clever. ...

I liked this poem. Just a couple of things. So, this is my second attempt at poetry. WOW! You're really good at poetry and this is a great poem. LEAVES ...

This is such a great poem! I love it. My favourite part is: My past is dead I asked her to leave My past is dead And my ghost follows ...

I liked this poem. Just you need to use more puncuation. W ith a million things to say, my mind growing weak I think about you all the time, all ...

Welcome to YWS CreativeXpressions, I liked this poem. Just one thing, I think you need to change the format a little, but thats just my opinion. You may have intended ...

I liked this poem. It has a strong meaning/message. Just one thing, It sees the darkness clouding in that is death, Which reeks of pollution, and its endangered inhabitants. "Death" ...

I loved this poem. I know everyone else has proberly said this, but it is really good. My favourite part was this: how the years passed since I played in ...

Not very helpful review. School time dreaming of places I have never been As the trolley hits the make shift wall at a velocity of 5m per second Sounds fast ...

Hey, I liked this poem. It has a very good point. Not everone has the ability to write good stories/poems, you're one of the ones that have it. Keep writing! ...

I quite like this poem. It sounds like you had a lot of fun in japan. Anyway I liked the repetition of This is my life in Japan Well done ...

I like think this poem is great. I wish I had wings. To sing and to call, to laugh and to fall. To live and to breath, to never ever ...

This poem is so cute! Just one thing, You started each stanza with It's almost kind of funny apart from the second one, it just seems a bit off, but ...

An ocean of overwhelming violet, Petals dusted across the star sprinkled plains, Profound sapphire above our heads, Slivers of moonlight create flickering shadows, In incessant ecstasy of true friends

Sorry, not very helpfull review. Why do you look out from a tainted window? Why do you wear shoes Crushing the dewy green grass Beneath your mud encrusted heals? Why ...

I liked it. I'm sure you'll get a really good mark for it on your homework. Well done. :D Keep writing! :)