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Re: hell is found in the children's section of the library
hiya :3 here for a short review: first off, i think the concept for this is pretty cool. the idea of turning something completely mundane and everyday into something basically ...
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Re: Night Driving
hiya :3 here to drop a review: first off, i love the images you used here like "fidgeting", "falling", "street lamp" and "headlights", i think they were really great at ...
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Re: Collector of Hues
hi there! here to leave a short review :] i felt like as a whole the language in the poem was quite pretty, but i personally feel that the structure ...
Nov 1, 2021 -
Re: Asthma
heya! here for a review :] ooh god this is a really relatable one. i completely understand the sensations you're describing here. i was sat on a sink counter too, ...
Oct 26, 2021 -
Re: Drawings (Extended)
hi there! poppin' in to review :] i really enjoyed the melancholic and somewhat reflective tone of the poem. i thought the metaphor of drawing was pretty effective and evoked ...
Oct 20, 2021 -
Re: Lizard
hi there! i thought this was such a cute poem :3 i feel like this a lot, like the creature who is about 1/100th of my size is probably more ...
Oct 19, 2021 -
Re: Musings from a Music Festival
hello,, i'm sorry i don't actually have anything constructive or coherent to say but i do want to put this poem in my mouth,,, i think it would taste good,,,, ...
Oct 18, 2021 -
Re: History
hiya here to review :3 here's how i interpreted the poem: from what i cant tell, you compared people to cockroaches and then used the fear of insects to show ...
Oct 18, 2021 -
Re: [To the shoreline]
hihi here to review :3 silver with the water, i like the imagery of this line. i feel like the tone is pretty poignant? especially in the last lines instead ...
Oct 17, 2021 -
Re: nightingales
ello ello another review :] notes ringing out through the panes of glass, breaching the vaccuum between us. i like this contradictions since sound/vibrations can't travel through a vacuum :3 ...
Oct 17, 2021 -
Re: dirt
hiya! droppin by for a review :] anyways, i like the concept of this poem: subverting the ideas around something that would normally be considered an insult as something beautiful. ...
Oct 17, 2021 -
Re: Infancy
hi there! this is my first ever review and i don't know how to use the quote function so... anyway! "Exhaling nicotine, the smoke dances in the cataracts of her ...
Oct 13, 2021
