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SEVENTEEN, BUT ONLY IN THE LEAST GROWN-UP SENSE POSSIBLE.

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: hell is found in the children's section of the library

    hiya :3 here for a short review: first off, i think the concept for this is pretty cool. the idea of turning something completely mundane and everyday into something basically ...

    Apr 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Night Driving

    hiya :3 here to drop a review: first off, i love the images you used here like "fidgeting", "falling", "street lamp" and "headlights", i think they were really great at ...

    Apr 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Collector of Hues

    hi there! here to leave a short review :] i felt like as a whole the language in the poem was quite pretty, but i personally feel that the structure ...

    Nov 1, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Asthma

    heya! here for a review :] ooh god this is a really relatable one. i completely understand the sensations you're describing here. i was sat on a sink counter too, ...

    Oct 26, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Drawings (Extended)

    hi there! poppin' in to review :] i really enjoyed the melancholic and somewhat reflective tone of the poem. i thought the metaphor of drawing was pretty effective and evoked ...

    Oct 20, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: Lizard

    hi there! i thought this was such a cute poem :3 i feel like this a lot, like the creature who is about 1/100th of my size is probably more ...

    Oct 19, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Musings from a Music Festival

    hello,, i'm sorry i don't actually have anything constructive or coherent to say but i do want to put this poem in my mouth,,, i think it would taste good,,,, ...

    Oct 18, 2021
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: History

    hiya here to review :3 here's how i interpreted the poem: from what i cant tell, you compared people to cockroaches and then used the fear of insects to show ...

    Oct 18, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: [To the shoreline]

    hihi here to review :3 silver with the water, i like the imagery of this line. i feel like the tone is pretty poignant? especially in the last lines instead ...

    Oct 17, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: nightingales

    ello ello another review :] notes ringing out through the panes of glass, breaching the vaccuum between us. i like this contradictions since sound/vibrations can't travel through a vacuum :3 ...

    Oct 17, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: dirt

    hiya! droppin by for a review :] anyways, i like the concept of this poem: subverting the ideas around something that would normally be considered an insult as something beautiful. ...

    Oct 17, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Infancy

    hi there! this is my first ever review and i don't know how to use the quote function so... anyway! "Exhaling nicotine, the smoke dances in the cataracts of her ...

    Oct 13, 2021


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