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Re: A Frog Adventure
I actually really liked this story. I also can honestly say that this is the first story about talking frogs I have ever read! I liked how you introduced Sam ...
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Re: Rumorson Middle School
This sounds really promising! Your characters are different from one another and are independent, which is a VERY good thing. They are strong individually and can hold their own in ...
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Re: Just Some Of The Things Supernatural Taught Me
I myself am a fan of Supernatural, so I relate to this quite a bit! I just want to let you know me and my friend read this, (we are ...
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Re: To the Giants
I LOVE this. The originality and creativity it must have taken for you to make this.... GAH! I'm impressed in how original your idea is! Your visuals that you create ...
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Re: Freshman; Characters
This is a very good character sheet, it is very original and descriptive! I would really look forward to reading the story/novel that this could turn into. I'm going to ...
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Re: The house on the mountain
What a powerful piece. The relationship between two sisters is shown beautifully here. Unfortunately, sisters can grow apart, and the last part of the piece really portrays the feelings that ...
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Re: Reborn
An amazing concept to write a poem on! I haven't seen many poems covering this on here, so nice job with the originality of the poem! The poem really describes ...
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Re: An Apology
Wow. Just "WOW!" Not only is this an amazing piece, but it is SO relatable. Anyways, now that I got that out of the way, I'll get right to it. ...
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Re: Hold My Hand
Okay, I just want to start off and say I CAN DEFINITELY relate to this. Now that that is out of the way, onto the review! I think that this ...
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Re: Everyone faces me
What an interesting piece. The piece being told from Death's perspective made the piece unique- I found as I was reading I was trying to distinguish who Death was and ...
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