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Re: The marriage of Ruth and Marcus
well, it is a happy ending. For now. It’s not really the end yet. Thx for reading/advice!
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Re: When it’s all done
They DO genuinely love each other but in a much more twisted way than how humans would love one another. They are both supernatural serial killers first and foremost, so ...
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Re: Princess Magdalena’s origin-Siren’s Desire
Because it’s in her perspective, it’s also in her mindset, so it’s written as if what he does is okay because he “loves her” and “would never hurt her” (until ...
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Re: Jessica’s origin | Part One: Childhood | Chapters 1, 2, + 3
I had a shorter origin for her where she’s 19: but I’m trying to write more about her in depth. Thx for reading!
Jul 16 -
Re: Five petrifying Richardson stories
Hmm…I meant to phrase it that he’s not sensitive in the same way Gabriel is. But thx for pointing that out. Thx for reading! (And unfortunately things don’t really get ...
Jul 16 -
Re: Raisa’s diary entry (5/18/1955)
In regards to the year and the mention of Disney World, I did not realize it was made in the 60s and wouldn’t be around (I googled this yesterday when ...
Jul 16 -
Re: Bethel’s origin
Thank you for reading. I’m glad you enjoyed this and I appreciate your advice.
Jul 15 -
Re: Bethel’s origin
Yes, it is. But this has been talked about before so I might consider trying to find a way to tell a story like this without breaking it up into ...
Jul 15 -
Re: Nobody likes the basement
I’m glad you enjoyed and thx for reading/advice!
Jul 15 -
Re: Bethel’s origin
I split the chapters for better organization. Thx for reading and advice!
Jul 15 -
Re: The many winding paths of Grasscove, U.S.A. : Part Seven
Emily is a ghost whereas Sybil is a skeleton. Thx for reading and the advice!
Jul 15 -
Re: Heaven and Hell is pretty cringe, actually: Part Eight
It is obvious to her, but she doesn’t know that Stella and Adele were somewhat working together. Thx for reading and the advice!
Jul 15 -
Re: Jessica’s origin | Part One: Childhood | Chapters 1, 2, + 3
I’m glad you liked it and thx for the advice! It takes place in the 1980s, not the 1800s.
Jul 15 -
Re: Jason’s biggest fears
He’s not guilty at all, he just doesn’t want to be found out. Thx for reading!
Jul 14 -
Re: Jeff’s little gift
Jeff does not know what to think of Randy’s actions because he never had someone try to really talk to him before. I do talk about Jeff more in other ...
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