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Thanks for the review! I%u2019ll edit this. So,Ariana was betrayed that her sister killed a child,because she%u2019s known her her whole life and she went and committed murder. The Mom ...

This was a funny poem to read! I think that most of the time,Winter is painted as this magical Heaven…when,in reality,it’s unforgiving was a nice change of pace from a ...

I edited the story. Thanks for the review.

I like this poem.It’s relatable.For one thing,I relate to the poem,because I feel like I’ve lost some of my myself.With each passing day and more things to do,you lose sight ...

I like this lets you know that you are more in life and that you deserve the world.Sometimes we forget that we are more in life and we need to ...

Thanks for the review! Those are some good points.I%u2019ll change the chapters into page breaks , get rid of the capitalization in some letters and I will replace the other ...

Thanks for the review! I%u2019m glad you liked my story.%u2728

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This is a very true poem,Earth offered life to us and as humans,we took it.We humans can be cruel to life at times.This was something nice and short to read.But ...

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I liked this poem,it was fun to read.Maybe this person feels lost about who they are and what their purpose in life is.They want to be positive and happy,but can ...

This origin story? It%u2019s part of a bigger story,my story:%u201DEloise-the demented doll woman.%u201D Grandparents aren%u2019t mentioned here and Leona would have to be three at the time this was w

Thanks.I%u2019ve got on origin story for Leona if you want to check it out.

Yes,those are possibilities.I%u2019m going to be giving the mother an origin story as soon as I have enough coins,so we hear her perspective of the story.

This is a lovely poem.I liked it and I thought it had some cool details.”You still sit there with a sense of false hope that even you aren’t aware of ...

Thanks for reading! I edited the story so that you know that Leona has powers.

Thanks for the review and I%u2019m glad you liked it.